Well *that* was a fine mess. Well said, and really one of the finer fights you've written. It's a place of obvious and significant improvement in your writing. And great characterization by actions and choices.
Great world building for the Abni and Zehyr, even if I *really* want to hang out with the Melor branch on the family now. :)
I really want to translate this into Fireteam and try to make congoers enact it once we're properly promoting this book.
Well *that* was a fine mess. Well said, and really one of the finer fights you've written. It's a place of obvious and significant improvement in your writing. And great characterization by actions and choices.
Great world building for the Abni and Zehyr, even if I *really* want to hang out with the Melor branch on the family now. :)
I really want to translate this into Fireteam and try to make congoers enact it once we're properly promoting this book.
Some CJ Cherryh action here…
A hell of a compliment, sir!